Finally I wrote my first poem which I am sure somehow is related to each of us here. Quite motivating though ![]()
Stirring Voyage
I wake up early morning
to see the darkness gone
Sun braces my passion
and I pray for the day I want
Nevertheless my dreams are over
and I realize how senile I've become
There's still a star shining
whose life is just dusk to dawn
Wake up! Wake up…
You old little teenybopper
Wake up from your fantasy
I know you were once slogger
Life has just taken another fold
You were and still are path breaker
Don't wait for the day to end
Show the world , you are risk-taker
This is the life long expedition
which is invariably ahead of time
Don't brood over your past
Your stars will certainly shine
Wake up! Wake up…
You have to bear the pain
Just wait and watch
One day success will also rain.
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Tuesday, June 27th, 2006 at 3:01 pm |
hmm … has depth … very good for a first timer
Tuesday, June 27th, 2006 at 5:21 pm |
thanks
Monday, July 10th, 2006 at 10:06 pm |
Your poem is inspiring.
Friday, August 11th, 2006 at 3:45 pm |
nice peom…does inspire…keep writing
Monday, October 12th, 2009 at 1:11 am |
hey there…a nice poem. the rythm’s finely crafted..hope to read more of your poems in future. thanks for sharing.